Comic 10 - 1.1.10

22nd Dec 2017, 7:48 PM in Book 1: End Zone, Canto 1
1.1.10
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Author Notes:

Cliff Hansen 22nd Dec 2017, 7:48 PM edit delete
Wow, I made it, didn't think I would! My...head...hurts...too much screen time! But wow, page ten! We've reached double digits. That's our first real milestone. We're now about a third through our first canto and there are three in Endzone.

Assuming the holidays treat me well enough, we'll probably get the next page on New Year's Eve or Day, back on our Sunday schedule.

I just want all my readers to know just how much I value you and am thankful you're enjoying my strange tale. I hope you and yours have a great solstice, Christmas, or whatever other holidays you celebrate this season.
Cliff Hansen 23rd Dec 2017, 9:47 AM edit delete
I had to fix a few minor mistakes in this one and reupload the image. Nothing major, but still enough to justify the trouble. Bad Cliff; that's what I get for rushing!

Comments:

Miguel1982 23rd Dec 2017, 7:36 PM edit delete reply
Love this work! Congrats on 10 successful pages!
This is the most complex human interaction page yet. From the news agency to the police partners, I love how this all comes together. I agree with the facts that the main police officer is saying about how Atheists are labeled as Satanists all to easily with little thought as to what is actually going on. Also, the banter and professional partner chemistry between the police woman and her partner is fantastic. The commentary on mainstream conservative news reporting is also spot-on. Well done.
I can't wait to read more.
Cliff Hansen 23rd Dec 2017, 8:00 PM edit delete reply
Thanks! Growing up Pentecostal, everything bad was "The Devil." Remember when Jesus killed an entire herd of pigs because they'd been possessed by demons? Think about that outside it's religious context, and how crazy is that? Of course in this story, something really bad IS happening, so people are going to jump to their own conclusions about what that is, and we can always rely on the conservative media to push the extreme emotion-based narratives.
...(RockB) 1st Feb 2018, 5:24 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
This page reminded me why I didn't switch on the TV for more than a year...
Cliff Hansen 1st Feb 2018, 6:04 PM edit delete reply
I know, right? Good for you for leaving the tube off that long! Read any good books during that time?
...(RockB) 2nd Feb 2018, 12:37 AM edit delete reply
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No. I'm spending most of my spare time on CF. :)