Comic 83 - 1.3.83

8th Aug 2018, 3:28 PM in Book 1: Endzone, Canto 3
1.3.83
Average Rating: 5 (2 votes)
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Author Notes:

Cliff Hansen 8th Aug 2018, 3:28 PM edit delete
Crime scenes are hard to draw! I need some degree of consistency there. This one took forever! Also: I miss Samson, it's been forever since we've seen him.

Comments:

...(RockB) 9th Aug 2018, 1:59 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Crime scenes are hard to do especially when you want the readers to keep their brains switched on. That's... something positive... I would like to use "admirable" but I'm afraid that this word has changed its meaning, away from what it literally means (or meant a long time ago). Anyway, thank you very much for the effort!
Edit, months later: Removed 2 typos.
Cliff Hansen 10th Aug 2018, 2:57 PM edit delete reply
Of course after this uploaded I noticed the snow moves around the soldiers' feet. Oh well.
...(RockB) 9th Aug 2018, 2:03 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
'nother thought: "Back up"? Not "Back off"? My knowledge of English has it's limits...
Cliff Hansen 10th Aug 2018, 2:56 PM edit delete reply
I keep running these through my head and they're pretty much equal but "back up" still sounds better. Back off is a little bit more of a going away, like you'd tell someone bothering you to back off. PĂ©rez is definitely bothered, but she's resigned to their presence, so she just wants them to physically relocate.

I love grammatical nuances like this!
...(RockB) 17th Aug 2018, 6:32 PM edit delete reply
...(RockB)
Thanks for explaining! I would not have understood her :D
Miguel1982 25th Aug 2018, 8:50 AM edit delete reply
I love how much is going on in Perez's head. It is really neat to see her process everything and put it together as best she can.